comments

Mary: I liked your project but it was a little cluttered. I think some things could have maybe been a little smaller when i got to focused on your project it kind of led my eyes off the page a little bit, but i could follow the visual flow. My main concern is just the fact that i think it needs a little more negative space.

Alex: I liked it although you may have had a little too much space and i like how you used creepy in the way that it goes through unorganized. I do think creepy should be 'creepy' and that childish should be more 'childish'. One way you can fix that is to make childish a little uneven or you could change some of the letters so they are back words, just so they look like a child wrote it (in an 'adult' way though, meaning: make it childish, but make it legible.)

Brianna: I liked how you used creative in your project and i also liked your use of adventurous, but i do think you should change things up and i do think that talkative should be in your face more, not exactly by change the size but maybe making the font for talkative a lot bolder and maybe a different, bolder font would work. I also think that talkative and trustworthy are too similar in size because when i look at this piece i go to loving fist, then adventurous, then creative, then I'm not sure which is next, talkative or trustworthy.

Sam: I like it, but i think you need less negative space and i do think it is top-heavy. You can fix the heaviness by changing the proximity of you're words and maybe moving things around like theatrical. Theatrical can go on an angle a little lower but I just don't think that theatrical should be right at the top. I also think that unique should shown me how 'unique' the word is, maybe make one of the letters in the word unique "uniquely" different by changing the font or size of the letter.

Tim: I like it but i don't really know where to go because about all the words are about the same size. I do like how you made the letters s m a r t equal up to smart.Over-all a good job but i think you just need to work on proximity and font size and maybe fonts themselves because to me the fonts are also a lot alike.